{"id":16,"date":"2011-11-25T09:57:13","date_gmt":"2011-11-24T20:57:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/?p=16"},"modified":"2011-11-25T15:36:22","modified_gmt":"2011-11-25T02:36:22","slug":"telling-peoples-stories","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/2011\/11\/25\/telling-peoples-stories\/","title":{"rendered":"Telling people&#8217;s stories"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m 22,000 words in so far, and it&#8217;s looking like this will be a substantial story.<\/p>\n<p>I say that because I&#8217;m starting out by having eight important characters tell their backstories (not just one after another &#8211; there&#8217;s plot advancement in between too).<\/p>\n<p>If I&#8217;m going to have that many important characters, I want each one to be unique and real to the reader before I get going. All too often I read a book and someone&#8217;s speaking and I think, &#8220;Who&#8217;s that character again?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>So far, I&#8217;ve had:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Berry, the shepherd&#8217;s daughter and traumatised ex-shaman-apprentice, and the assault that led her to break her oath and flee to the city<\/li>\n<li>Patience, the Countygold (Countess), and the youthful boating tragedy that shaped her political ideals<\/li>\n<li>Dignity, the mad scientist son of radical revolutionists, and what he learned from being imprisoned throughout his late teens and early twenties.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Five to go, and even if they&#8217;re all relatively short, I&#8217;ll easily hit 30,000 words before that introductory part of the book is done. So, assuming a beginning, middle and end of roughly the same size, about 100K.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m looking forward to what Hope the strikingly beautiful commoner magus, Windknower the shy, scruffy werewolf, Learned Vigilance the very serious religious scholar, Tranquil the lower-nobility statistician and Rain the docklands social worker have to say.<\/p>\n<p>I also want to do cards (or Evernote notes, at least) for each of them outlining what they want, why they can&#8217;t have it, and what they will (and won&#8217;t) go through to get it. That&#8217;s what is going to drive my plot. One of my faults as a writer is that I&#8217;m too softhearted towards my characters. I give them what they want instead of making them work for it. Well &#8211; that stops now.<\/p>\n<p>UPDATE: Just finished Hope&#8217;s story, another couple of thousand words. I had her down as a good girl, but she surprised me with how much trouble she got into. I never know what these characters are going to do ahead of time.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m 22,000 words in so far, and it&#8217;s looking like this will be a substantial story. I say that because I&#8217;m starting out by having eight important characters tell their backstories (not just one after another &#8211; there&#8217;s plot advancement &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/2011\/11\/25\/telling-peoples-stories\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"content-type":"","_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0},"categories":[5],"tags":[],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=16"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":18,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16\/revisions\/18"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=16"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=16"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/csidemedia.com\/gryphonclerks\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=16"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}