Originally shared by MJ Bush

When Characters Argue

Punctuate with action. Like leaving.

Don’t let it get drawn out and flimsy.

DO something.

A drawn out argument loses punch, and makes us wonder why neither is putting their foot down or compromising. It makes the positions look weak and the emotions seem insincere.

Action solidifies a position and makes us believe they mean it. Makes us believe they feel it.

Not open to negotiation? Leave.

Ready to fight? Throw a punch.

Bonus: Give them attitudes and multiple things to argue over, then let subtext reign. Even if it lasts longer, this adds substance and keeps the exchange from seeming flimsy and insincere.

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