I hadn’t thought about it before, but now that she points it out, I think KKR has a point here. There is a blanding of voice going on in today’s publishing landscape. You can pick up books by half a dozen different authors and have difficulty telling them apart. (Not only because of voice, either. A lot of people are trying to write the same books, because those books sell.)
She calls out the Clarion Writers’ Workshop in particular. I’ve heard from other sources that Clarion graduates do tend to write similar stories (which become part of the expectation of what a pro story is like, so even people who haven’t been to Clarion start writing that way).
I disagree with Rusch about head-hopping – I think it is a fault, and disorienting to the reader, unless you’re in omniscient POV (at which point it isn’t head-hopping) – but her main point is valid. I’ve experienced several critiques which seem to be aimed at flattening out my style and voice into the way the critiquer would express things, and generally that comes from a critiquer who is not as well-read as I am – who has mainly read recent books which are written in the bland, generic “Serious Writer Voice”.
Originally shared by Kristine Kathryn Rusch
Today’s Business Blog looks at a weird phenomenon I call “Serious Writer Voice.”
This is a thought-provoking article about the role of class in the writing and publishing world.
I come from a family which was working class further back (my father’s father drove a train; my mother’s father ran a bus company, but came from a long line of tradesmen). My parents, though, were both schoolteachers, and by the time I was born had achieved some degree of middle-class economic stability, in part because my father, as an ex-serviceman, had received subsidised university education and a cheap house loan. He also wrote (nonfiction) books in his spare time, and by my mid-teens was making good money from them.
My parents supported me through university, and when I got an in-house job with a publisher, it was with the publisher who put out my father’s books (I’d previously been freelance, which I could sustain because I was still living with my parents). One of my earlier freelance jobs I got in part because the editor concerned was married to one of my former professors. Personal connection plays a big role in the publishing industry, and if I’d been, say, a Samoan kid from South Auckland whose parents worked in a factory, my opportunities would have been a lot less. I’m not saying it couldn’t be done (though I never saw it done, so maybe it couldn’t); it would, at the least, have been a lot harder.
Even today, I’m able to take one day off every two weeks to write, sacrificing 10% of my income, because I’m in a job that pays enough for me to do that (and where my employer allows me to do it). If I was struggling to put food on the table, and having to write late at night or on the weekends while exhausted from a tough week of work, I wouldn’t be anything like as productive as I am.
Originally shared by Rick Wayne (Author)
Lisa Cohen Mike Reeves-McMillan you guys might find this opinion piece interesting re: the article you shared earlier. An excerpt:
“Last year, I went to a writing conference in Boston. One of the first panel discussions was about how a writer claims authority, how it is that a writer asserts that he or she possesses the expertise to write about a topic, and how concomitantly the editor reading through the submission slush pile can determine whether the writer is someone who can claim authority as a writer.
One of the panelists, an editor, offered that the first thing he looked for when skimming through the cover letter was whether the writer possessed an MFA. He did this, he hastened to qualify, not because it guaranteed that the submitter would be a better writer, but because taking a year or two off out of one’s life to dedicate oneself to writing proved that one was serious as a writer. I came off my chair in anger—how could he assert such a thing? My friend pulled me back down, but I continued to fume. Who has more dedication: the person who has the financial wherewithal to spend time in a writing program, or the writer who writes despite having to work full-time, early in the morning, with absolutely no one but themselves for motivation? As another panel member offered their method for detecting “dedication,” I flashed back to sitting with Fred Busch as he recounted stories from his early days of working all day and spending time with his wife and son in the early evening and then taking the typewriter into the bathroom, so as not to wake his sleeping family, and writing as much as he could before fatigue demanded he go to bed. How much more dedication did one need to prove beyond that? But that’s not exactly something you can put on a resume. That panelist’s misguided assumption, that an MFA necessarily connotes greater dedication to writing, reveals an all too common blindness to the easy privilege of those with financial security.”
Lisa Cohen Mike Reeves-McMillan you guys might find this opinion piece interesting re: the article you shared earlier. An excerpt:
“Last year, I went to a writing conference in Boston. One of the first panel discussions was about how a writer claims authority, how it is that a writer asserts that he or she possesses the expertise to write about a topic, and how concomitantly the editor reading through the submission slush pile can determine whether the writer is someone who can claim authority as a writer.
One of the panelists, an editor, offered that the first thing he looked for when skimming through the cover letter was whether the writer possessed an MFA. He did this, he hastened to qualify, not because it guaranteed that the submitter would be a better writer, but because taking a year or two off out of one’s life to dedicate oneself to writing proved that one was serious as a writer. I came off my chair in anger—how could he assert such a thing? My friend pulled me back down, but I continued to fume. Who has more dedication: the person who has the financial wherewithal to spend time in a writing program, or the writer who writes despite having to work full-time, early in the morning, with absolutely no one but themselves for motivation? As another panel member offered their method for detecting “dedication,” I flashed back to sitting with Fred Busch as he recounted stories from his early days of working all day and spending time with his wife and son in the early evening and then taking the typewriter into the bathroom, so as not to wake his sleeping family, and writing as much as he could before fatigue demanded he go to bed. How much more dedication did one need to prove beyond that? But that’s not exactly something you can put on a resume. That panelist’s misguided assumption, that an MFA necessarily connotes greater dedication to writing, reveals an all too common blindness to the easy privilege of those with financial security.”
The Toast usually does clever, sophisticated satire, but this isn’t that. Instead, it’s a heartfelt report from inside the traditional publishing industry about why it’s so lacking in diversity, and what needs to happen to change that.
Wow, this has been a good sales week for me, and it’s only Wednesday. Everyone must be clearing their backlog.
This morning’s email contains an acceptance from Farstrider magazine for my comedic story “Mail Order Witch”. They’re the twelfth market I’ve submitted that story to (a personal record). I’ve had four form rejections, six personalised rejections, and I think I withdrew it once because the market concerned had stopped responding to communication.
Now I have the Best Problem: I only have three stories still out on submission, because I keep selling them.