Sep 21

This is a good article about “folding” – compacting your stories down by making every element do more work and…

This is a good article about “folding” – compacting your stories down by making every element do more work and connect more closely with the other elements. Rather than have two colourless minor characters, combine them into one more interesting one.

There’s a caveat to this, as to all writing advice. Pushed too far, you can end up with unlikely coincidences about who knows each other, and the reader can get the feeling – as I did from Dracula – that the population of Great Britain is approximately 12 people, given how many coincidental connections there are between them.

Sep 21

I once read a book in which Arthur Conan Doyle strapped his service revolver – which, at that period, would have…

I once read a book in which Arthur Conan Doyle strapped his service revolver – which, at that period, would have been about a foot long and weighed several pounds – to his ankle using a necktie, and concealed it under his trouser leg.

I’ve also read multiple books in which revolvers become automatics or vice versa, and likewise with rifles and shotguns (which are often used for the wrong targets).

Originally shared by Karen Conlin

Carolyn Haley, over on Rich Adin’s blog, writes about action scenes.

https://americaneditor.wordpress.com/2016/08/08/thinking-fiction-fighting-in-fiction/
Sep 21

This is a good list. Especially note number one; I see it often.

This is a good list. Especially note number one; I see it often.

Originally shared by Karen Conlin

A list of troubles beginning writers often have, all of which can be helped by solid copy editing.

https://americaneditor.wordpress.com/2016/02/01/thinking-fiction-first-novel-flubs-and-follies/
Sep 21

My mantra when I was a copy editor was “always check everything, even the things you think are right”.

My mantra when I was a copy editor was “always check everything, even the things you think are right”.

Originally shared by Karen Conlin

There’s “true,” there’s “factual,” and there’s “real.” The best fiction blends these all into a seamless whole.

https://americaneditor.wordpress.com/2015/06/01/thinking-fiction-verisimilitude/
Sep 20

Watch out for something not a million miles from this in Auckland Allies book 4.

Watch out for something not a million miles from this in Auckland Allies book 4.

Originally shared by Winchell Chung

Turn your tricorder into an emotion meter

In that case, the machine’s emotional predictions were correct 87% of the time. When the machine based its predictions on other people’s emotions, they were 72% accurate.

http://www.businessinsider.com/mit-radio-waves-emotions-2016-9

Sep 20

Relevant to my interests, since I’ve just finished a novel about an election for a new Representative Assembly.

Relevant to my interests, since I’ve just finished a novel about an election for a new Representative Assembly. How your parliament is laid out encodes certain assumptions about how it functions.

https://www.wired.com/2016/09/beautiful-book-reveals-architectures-impact-politics/

Sep 16

As someone who lives with a disabled person, I’ve learned that life with a disability is not always as I would have…

As someone who lives with a disabled person, I’ve learned that life with a disability is not always as I would have assumed. Talk to people.

Originally shared by Karen Conlin

http://lithub.com/the-dos-and-donts-of-writing-about-the-disabled/
Sep 16

I found this moving. The headline is, as is so often the case, a bit hyperbolic.

I found this moving. The headline is, as is so often the case, a bit hyperbolic.

Originally shared by Conscious Style Guide

“The way we talk about [sex and abstinence] needs to change. People need to realize there is nothing that can detract from your worth.”—Elizabeth Smart

#gender #sexuality

http://ow.ly/KTJs304hGlk